Friday, 20 November 2015

Improved Evaluation

3 comments:

  1. Hammad you have not uploaded your prelim film onto your blog!!!

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  3. Well organised and a mainly satisfactory evaluation of technical aspects of your shoot to include screen shots.

    Next steps to strengthen further case studies and evaluations:

    1) You must be specific when discussing what camera angles and movement you used. Though you have offered examples, you could've referenced these in more detail, and other shots you used.

    2) Editing effects, you generalise and mainly list here without referencing specific examples from your film. For example you could say something like

    ....we used colour alteration from colour to black and white in order to.......

    ....we also used slow motion towards the end of the sequence because.....

    At least 3 examples of specific editing skills you have learned would strengthen.

    Well done nevertheless for including screen shots to illustrate your examples. This is good practice but more references to specific examples are important to strengthen your evaluation.

    Level 2-3 D/C

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